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Mint Snowball




     I could appreciate that Mint Snowball was very well written even though it wasn't my favorite thing to read. The narrative described a longing for something that the wrier had never had but yet so deeply desired. She describes the way it made her family feel and the way the rest of the town reacted to the special recipe of the mint snowball. She wants to taste this mint snowball so bad and she feels like she can't be complete until she has it.


     Almost anyone can appreciate how well written this narrative was. It went over the background of the mint snowball, then it described the action, and then it describes her ideas on the events. Her word choice made the entire story flavor-filled. She was very descriptive on her emotions while describing what she thought about the whole thing. This narrative was very well written and almost picture-perfect.

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  1. KatieSeptember 13, 2017 at 2:53 PM

    The way you described the narrative was great! I liked how you found positive aspects of the story even though it wasn't your favorite.

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