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"Ughhhhh!" Michael groans watching the monumental disappointment that is the LSU game.

     "I can't believe this is happening I thought we were going to be good." Johnathon sighs as he tries to make sense of what is happening.

     "Our defense is doing terrible." Michael says.

"I don't even want to watch this anymore!" said Johnathon .

     "Do you think next game will be any better?" Michael asked.

"It better be or else I'm going to stop watching these games!" Johnathon exclaimed.

     "That makes two of us!" Michael said as he turned off the tv.

   

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  1. JC's BlogSeptember 19, 2017 at 6:17 PM

    LSU did really bad last weekend. Hopefully they pick up momentum and start winning games.

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  2. JackSeptember 20, 2017 at 2:05 PM

    I like how I can relate to this dialogue.

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  3. UnknownSeptember 20, 2017 at 2:41 PM

    Completely agree with the general message of this dialogue. Also I liked how you stayed consistent with the fact that your speech tags are after your dialogue.

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  4. Austin SSeptember 20, 2017 at 7:09 PM

    I really could sense the frustration of the two characters. Well written.

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  5. ThomasSeptember 21, 2017 at 11:45 AM

    I could really tell that that characters were very frustrated. I hope LSU gets the win next week.

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  6. EmmaSeptember 30, 2017 at 10:24 AM

    The characters seemed really upset. Hopefully LSU wins next time!!

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