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The wind rubbed my hair like a blissful brush,

 kicking up the sand like it's lighter than dust,

forcing the waves to crash upon the shore,

annoying sounds I could not ignore,

as I wade in waist deep,

The brackish waters take me off my feet,

suddenly feels so cold,

The towel so far from hold,

leaving the water as I continue to freeze,

remembering a warm summer breeze.

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  1. Gregory F.March 14, 2018 at 7:16 PM

    Your poem paints a great picture. I just wonder where you are. Are you at a lake or a marshy setting since you describe the water as brackish?

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  2. KatherineMarch 15, 2018 at 8:31 PM

    I love the imagery in your poem. The sensory detail really makes me feel like I'm there.

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